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killer222
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 48
Northolt,Middlesex,England

0 posted 2000-04-06 12:09 PM




Life is such a boring place
There doesn't seem much point
You spend your whole life working
And smoking lots of joints

It seems to me there's just one thing
Life's worth living for
Something once you've found it
All you want is more

When you find this wonderful thing
You feel so strange inside
A feeling that's so powerful
It makes you want to cry

Maybe life's not boring
Maybe I have found a point
To have this feeling in my heart
And no, it does not disappoint

This feeling is the greatest
It's like living in a dream
And as long as we're together
Heaven’s where I’ll be



 MTK
KILLER222 :-)

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-06 12:24 PM


Beautifully done poem!

Denise

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-04-07 11:19 AM


Hi Killer,

Well said there is always some thing worth living for we just have to find it and you said it well.

Welcome to passions

Cerenity

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