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Sepia Mountains And Valleys |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sepia Mountains And Valleys ~*Marge Tindal*~ Mountain veiled soft sepia tone across distant horizons rise towering from the base clear up to the sky reflected in the valley snuggled close in lap of land take me back to the mountain top so I can once more stand and gaze across the valley of this great land Sepia hue of yon mountain lost now from my view take me again to the mountain top so the valley once more comes into my view ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes we appreciate the valley more when we can look at it with perspective, eh? Nice one, Marge..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Yes, the valley looks lovely from the mountain top ... and the mountain top so inviting from the valley floor. Thanks for your comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Marge As a mountain lover myself, I truly loved this one. Made me think of my times in western North Carolina...in the mountains. Thank you much for the memory. Beautiful imagery in this! AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love this, Marge...such beautiful imagery! ....And so alive with longing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
margie-girl...you did it again...another beautiful, perfect poem...and as always... with your creative and imaginative presentation. perfect. take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful perpectives in this, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Thank you. I also love the mountain range of which you speak. Martie~ Thank you, sweet lady. Yes, the ~spirit~ is being pulled to the mountain. JanetMarie~ Thank you again my friend. Hoot~ Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, You always seem to take me on such beautiful trips and this one is so beautifully done. Thank you my love, Cerenity |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
~Marge~ You do have a way with words that touches the soul. Love this one, too. Have a great day!!! And by the way, my friend loved "Soldier With Wings"!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully done. It is always so easy to feel your spirit and the spirit of nature in anything you grace us with. |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
very nice. it is well written with wonderful style. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ You're welcome on any 'trip' I take. Thank you. TerryW~ You're a doll ! I'm pleased you let me know about 'Soldier' Thank you. Mike~ What a wonderful thing for you to say. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A valley is only a valley if you're on the mountain. Great little poem Liz |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a great piece! In fact, I wished that I could be there too, my friend!! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ Thank you. The mountain often disappears from view when you're standing on the top .. and the valley beckons. Then when in the valley ... so beckons the mountain. I love the climb up and back down. Nate~ I wish you were too, my friend. So good to see you when you drop in here. Thank you for liking.That makes me smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Weaubleu~ I missed you in there and certainly didn't mean to. Thank you for the read and for the nice comment. I'm pleased that you liked it. Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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