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If I Could
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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If I Could If I could take away the pain And claim it for myself I surely would If I could make you well today, Relieve you of your illness I would If I could love you through it all I do And comfort your heart I am trying If I could stay beside you through the storm I am here If I could make every day more beautiful Or make the spring come faster The flowers more vibrant The birds sing a better song The April rains turn to May sunshine The nights more tranquil I will do all this If you need me to help you heal I will If you want to live again We shall Together to the end You and me Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-06-2000).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Liz, What are you doing up this time of the night/morning. This is a great little morsel jest before bed. Darn how time flies. See ya later I'm a sleepy head. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
True love and devotion .... this touches my heart, Liz ... Beautifully expressed ..... "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
You are ~Beautiful~ Special poem you have written here Liz...< !signature--> Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 04-06-2000).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You two are so fortunate to have each other... and we're equally as fortunate to be able to share in your emotions through this journey.... Nicely done, my friend..  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This touched my heart, Elizabeth... the love shines through. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz, this poem shines with your devotion and I know that your words will also bring him the healing power of love. Beautiful!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful poem of true love and devotion... these words and emotions heal us all... perfect Liz, as always. take carem jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Liz, thank you for this beautiful poem - it touched my heart! So happy that you have such a wonderful relationship with your mate - reminds me of me and my wife.  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This touched my heart, Elizabeth. This is so beautiful and a wonderful expression of your love and devotion. Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful expression of true love  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This is an exquisite poem and you are one wonderful lady. Love Sy |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Liz, this is a beautiful perception of true love that few of us will find. Keep up the good work. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your comments to this poem mean so much to me, as does your loving support. Thank you all so very much. Tonight I will read this to him along with the responses. He will be touched Thank you Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful Poem!!!!!!  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Liz, You are so loving and special. This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Parker |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Liz, both of you are in my prayers. What a beautifully done devotional poem you have here...these are some things I've been wanting to say myself lately. Hugs, Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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