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Whispers.......... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Whisper to Me Whisper to me soft and low Tell me what I am to give Whisper in the soft moonglow That my sins you will forgive Whisper within nights sweet arms What will fill your eyes with smiles Whisper to me with your charms A fight for love is worthwhile Whisper and look into my eyes That I bring a song to you Whisper while stars fill the skies That love is once again true Whisper at the break of dawn That I filled your dreams with sun Whisper until your breath is gone That our love song is not done Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
If only I could find that love to whisper to me~ Lovely poem~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Butterfly, Nicely done. Maybe a little cuddling to go with that whisper? I really enjoyed this. INclan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! oooohhhhhh mmmmyyyyyy sweet butterfly... this is DIVINE... I see someones been whipsering in your ear too...(smile) GIRL I LOVE this... it my most fav of yours...loooovvvve seeing this side of you. certain words were put on this earth for poetry...whisper being one of them...butterfly being another... love ya ss, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
JM says some words were put on this earth for poetry. I say some people were put here to weave those words, and you sweet butterfly are one. This is beautifully done!  Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Marie* Ahhhhhh so do I! INclan* lol yes that always goes well with a whisper Eagle & J.M.* Thank you so much!!! Nope no whispering here maybe just some wishful whispering thinking...lol And you are sooooooo right "whisper" is meant for poetry it sounds beautiful all by itself. Ok so I'm blushing...and wishing I was as wonderful a weaver as you seem to think Eagle ....who's been filling your head with these stories..lol But seriously, I am so touched by your comments you know how much it means coming from you. Forgive me I just had to lighten it up because it's always hard to accept words of kindness over words of critisism...I'm working on it...and you have been giving me lots of practice....lol **Angel Wing Hugs**Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Well ... this is so soft and feathery that it has to be a 'Whisper'. I am one who also loves that word. But right now I'm gonna shout ... THIS IS BEAUTIFUL ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Butterflies! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whispers? This shouts of love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soft and sensual and love filled, this poem. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Marge* Always my voice of encouragement...thank you for reading and thank you for your shouts...lol Denise* Thank you so much I'm so glad you liked it. Hoot* Love is something that no matter how you say it....the end result is the same Martie* Thank you for reading and taking the time to reply. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Butterflies, Girl...wow did this one touch my heart! You sure act like a woman in love to me hehe. This is definitely my favorite poem by you thus far. And yes you are right, the word whisper is so beautiful. Just the way it rolls off the tounge is almost like a whisper in itself. The Aimster stands in awe of you!! Take care and God Bless! AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice writing. Super job with the rhyme pattern. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful whispers...so it is whispers you women enjoy..I must keep this thought in mind the very next time. Just having fun...I knew that.... James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Amy* Thank you so much...poetry is a form of acting at times and release...lol wishful whisper thinking... Danny* Thank you for taking the time to comment and read, after reading your own beautiful poetry I'm touched that you liked mine. Jmlee12345* Thank you and if you need some more lines to use you just call me Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Butterfiles.. . shhhhhhhhhhh. . . do you hear that? It's what I feel about your poem. . . it's *shhhhhhhh* wonderful. . . The whispers in our lives are there to tell us things. . . if only we'd listen. . . Beautiful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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