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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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I wish you saw me the way that I see me Broken and worn with the days of before I wish that you could look inside my heart Feel the pain that I feel I wish that there were more time for us So you could see the way I bleed I wish that you could understand That I’m lonely inside my head I wish that there were space for me Somewhere in your heart I wish that you were here with me To share in the joy and that I feel I wish that everything were as perfect as before If I try I know that I can make it better I wish that we were rich Money beyond compare I wish that I could make you happy Just like before I wish that your struggles would disappear Vanish before your eyes I wish to be your one and only But wishes are like lies No matter what I say or do No matter how much I wish I know that wish never come true So I’ll have to just sit here and cry Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
My dear friend, you do not post often enough. You remember the old looney toons cartoons?...the one with the witch that cackles and then darts off, leaving only bobby pins behind?...yeah, that was me a minute ago when I saw your name gracing the forums (I was in such a hurry to read what you posted, and all!!).  (yeah, I'm a nut)Athough I don't know what inspired this poem, I can honestly say right now that parts of it read as if you took them straight from my heart. Have you been reading my mind again, miss? lol Good to see you posting in here, don't let it go so long next time!! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Satiate...I think I'll pass on the obvious comparison about Broomhilda *ROFL* j/k  Ladycat, my friend for many years, I can tell your hormones have been raging again....and through such rage have you produced a very poignant, heartfelt message, about time spent with a loved one, or the lack thereof. Thank you for opening up, and for sharing this with us...It's been a very long time since last you posted.  Alicat the Persnikitty  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ladycat, I think there is a time in all our lives that we wish we could recapture the past to forget the present. Unfortunately, that hardly ever seems to happen. Nice work. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Alastair...I have but 5 words for you, my friend...I know where you live  *sniff*(you are so mean to me) ROFL |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
AAAACCKKKK!!!! Time to head to them thar hills!!! Um...Satiate...Ladycat just let me in on lil secret...um...this poem is not about her in the least....it's about us.  Bad Ladycat...bad bad bad...*searches for a rolled up newspaper* Alicat, heading for the hills [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
You two can fight face to face.. As for me.. I'm heading for the hills too and you can't be where I am.. I know that Satiate is going to come for the both of us soon.. Love, Lady |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
ROFL Where on earth did I put my broom?? |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Um..Satiate, I think it got busted when you cracked it over my noggin... Alicat, heading for the hills with broom pieces in his fur |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Are you sure that she just cracked it over your head? hehe.. I'm too far away to see what happened it, but I'm sure that you are in more pain than that.. I'm glad that I don't live near either of you.. I would hate to wake up in the morning sore.. hahahaha.. Love, Lady Cat stay away from my hills.. |
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