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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-04-05 07:10 AM


Peek-A-Boo Heart
~*Marge Tindal*~

Hidden in the corner
Recessed in my mind
Visions of you enter
Peeking from behind
Doors thought closed
I catch you there in
Peek-A-Boo of mind
Hidden doorway open
Tiny crack at a time
Ducking in and out of
Peek-A-Boo's rhyme

Peek-A-Boo I see you
In a corner of memory
Wanting love to not be
So invisible in your life
As to pass by you again
Without calling you out
Among loves playground
Inviting you come play
Peek-A-Boo I see you





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2000-04-05 07:24 AM


Ah, I know how it feels when you find those "doors thought closed" weren't locked.  Peek a boos, Indeed...  Great poem, Marge.


Michael

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2 posted 2000-04-05 08:32 AM


Nicely done.  Put a smile on my face to prepare me for the day ahead.  *smile*
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3 posted 2000-04-05 08:52 AM


~Marge~
Peek-A-Boo Heart what a delightful title and indeed the poem was exactly that, a delight to read.      


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-04-05 09:17 AM


I hope this one goes into you poetry "Book of Delights". It's almost as delightful as you are
Liz

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5 posted 2000-04-05 10:50 AM


Marge,
You and your poem are my delight. *L* Sy

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6 posted 2000-04-05 11:01 AM


Hidden doorway open
Tiny crack at a time
Ducking in and out of
Peek-A-Boo's rhyme

Peek-A-Boo I see you
In a corner of memory
Wanting love to not be
So invisible in your life
As to pass by you again
---------------

margie-girl I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!
its perfect!!!
"loves playground"...what an awesome line.
this is one of my favs of yours.
take care,jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger

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7 posted 2000-04-05 11:33 AM


Marge-

I think this is my favorite one of yours, or at least one of them. Catchy title first of all. Peek a boo heart...I LOVED IT!... You are a very talented poet, and your writing leaves me with a big smile and has quite a calming effect on me. I really enjoyed this one!!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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8 posted 2000-04-05 11:35 AM


Aren't memories sometimes a beautiful thing  
TerryW
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9 posted 2000-04-05 11:42 AM


Marge,
     No wI know that you will never cease to amaze me, dear!  Peek-a-boo indeed.  I have loved everything I have read of yours to date, and I find more to enjoy each day!
  

Love ya,
Terry

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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10 posted 2000-04-05 01:10 PM


Hey, who's this little peek-a-boo
That I see invading you?
Lurking there to catch a peek,
Playing silly hide-and-seek?

If I catch that scalywag
We'll have a little game of Tag
Then he'll find out I'm your man
If not, I'll show him kick-the-can!!!

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2000-04-05 01:15 PM


*Let me preface these replies by saying that a quick comment to Balladeer the other evening prompted the thought that spawned this little quickie.
Sooooooooo, a GREAT BIG hug to Balladeer !
  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Michael~
Thank you, sweetie.

Mike~
I do like your smile.

Tracie~
You are sooooo kind.

Elizabeth, dear one~
Thank you.  Delights back to you.

Seymour~
I'm delighted that you think so.

JanetMarie~
I am really pleased that this little
poem likes you.

Amy~
Thank you for the kind comments.

Hoot~
Yes, they are always beautiful.

TerryW~
Your comments always please me !
Peek-A-Boo !
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-04-05 01:41 PM


Ballader~
LOL !  Kick-The-Can indeed !
There I was posting my thanks to the
replies ... and YOU 'peeked' around
the corner !  SEE how you are !
Thank you for the 'quickie'!
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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13 posted 2000-04-05 01:48 PM


Peek a Boo Heart - first I was ready for a children's treat, but it quickly escalated into a heart-warming reminder to adults!  Thanks Marge!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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14 posted 2000-04-05 04:14 PM


Title and poem are both delightful! *S*
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15 posted 2000-04-05 06:19 PM


Marge, just to let you know i took a peek-a-boo look at this.  Glad i did!
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16 posted 2000-04-05 08:43 PM


This is delightful, Marge!

Denise

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Sunshine~
I guess the child in us all can't resist
a little Peek-A-Boo !  

Suthern~
I'm glad you liked.

Danny~
Peek-A-Boo !
I saw you !

Denise~
Thank you.
It's beginning to grow on me too !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2000-04-05 10:53 PM


Upbeat and fun - That always works for me, Marge...
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19 posted 2000-04-05 11:05 PM


*peek* I like what I see...

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


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20 posted 2000-04-05 11:14 PM


Peek-a-Boo indeed!
I almost missed this one!
Great poem marge!
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard



Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2000-04-06 07:46 AM


Nan~
Thanks .. I like the fun of it too.

Elizabeth~
*Boo* .. I'm glad you do !

Mariee~
I'm glad you didn't miss it too !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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