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Peek-A-Boo Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Peek-A-Boo Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ Hidden in the corner Recessed in my mind Visions of you enter Peeking from behind Doors thought closed I catch you there in Peek-A-Boo of mind Hidden doorway open Tiny crack at a time Ducking in and out of Peek-A-Boo's rhyme Peek-A-Boo I see you In a corner of memory Wanting love to not be So invisible in your life As to pass by you again Without calling you out Among loves playground Inviting you come play Peek-A-Boo I see you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, I know how it feels when you find those "doors thought closed" weren't locked. Peek a boos, Indeed... Great poem, Marge. Michael |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Put a smile on my face to prepare me for the day ahead. *smile* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~Marge~ Peek-A-Boo Heart what a delightful title and indeed the poem was exactly that, a delight to read.  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I hope this one goes into you poetry "Book of Delights". It's almost as delightful as you are Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You and your poem are my delight. *L* Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hidden doorway open Tiny crack at a time Ducking in and out of Peek-A-Boo's rhyme Peek-A-Boo I see you In a corner of memory Wanting love to not be So invisible in your life As to pass by you again --------------- margie-girl I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! its perfect!!! "loves playground"...what an awesome line. this is one of my favs of yours. take care,jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge- I think this is my favorite one of yours, or at least one of them. Catchy title first of all. Peek a boo heart...I LOVED IT!... You are a very talented poet, and your writing leaves me with a big smile and has quite a calming effect on me. I really enjoyed this one!! AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Aren't memories sometimes a beautiful thing |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge, No wI know that you will never cease to amaze me, dear! Peek-a-boo indeed. I have loved everything I have read of yours to date, and I find more to enjoy each day!  Love ya, Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, who's this little peek-a-boo That I see invading you? Lurking there to catch a peek, Playing silly hide-and-seek? If I catch that scalywag We'll have a little game of Tag Then he'll find out I'm your man If not, I'll show him kick-the-can!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Let me preface these replies by saying that a quick comment to Balladeer the other evening prompted the thought that spawned this little quickie. Sooooooooo, a GREAT BIG hug to Balladeer ! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Michael~ Thank you, sweetie. Mike~ I do like your smile. Tracie~ You are sooooo kind. Elizabeth, dear one~ Thank you. Delights back to you. Seymour~ I'm delighted that you think so. JanetMarie~ I am really pleased that this little poem likes you. Amy~ Thank you for the kind comments. Hoot~ Yes, they are always beautiful. TerryW~ Your comments always please me ! Peek-A-Boo ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ballader~ LOL ! Kick-The-Can indeed ! There I was posting my thanks to the replies ... and YOU 'peeked' around the corner ! SEE how you are ! Thank you for the 'quickie'! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Peek a Boo Heart - first I was ready for a children's treat, but it quickly escalated into a heart-warming reminder to adults! Thanks Marge! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Title and poem are both delightful! *S* |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marge, just to let you know i took a peek-a-boo look at this. Glad i did! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ I guess the child in us all can't resist a little Peek-A-Boo ! Suthern~ I'm glad you liked. Danny~ Peek-A-Boo ! I saw you ! Denise~ Thank you. It's beginning to grow on me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Upbeat and fun - That always works for me, Marge...  |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*peek* I like what I see... Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Peek-a-Boo indeed! I almost missed this one! Great poem marge! Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thanks .. I like the fun of it too. Elizabeth~ *Boo* .. I'm glad you do ! Mariee~ I'm glad you didn't miss it too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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