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CupidyCassie
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0 posted 2000-04-05 12:18 PM


Life
Is it really what it's cracked up to be?
Moments of hope and loss
Friends that come and go
Feelings of despair
Cheerished loved ones
Fitting in
Being afraid
Knowing someone will always be there
Feeling loved
Helping others
Showing your true colors
Being yourself
Life is a gift



 

© Copyright 2000 Cassandra - All Rights Reserved
Tom Sawyer
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1 posted 2000-04-05 01:00 AM


I like the progression of feelings in this.  Well done.
Mike
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2 posted 2000-04-05 01:07 AM


Nicely done.  Enjoyed.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-04-05 06:27 AM


Cassie~
I like this.
Welcome to Passion's.
YES .. life is all that
and MORE !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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4 posted 2000-04-06 05:45 AM


I think marge has said it perfectly. It is certainly an amazing experience.  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

lucky
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5 posted 2000-04-06 05:54 AM


Life is still the best show in town.

 

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-04-06 06:23 AM


Welcome to the family! There is a lot of wisdom in your poem. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
tracie66
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7 posted 2000-04-06 06:51 AM


Welcome to the family~

Life has it ups
            and downs
Lots and laughter
            and frowns
But who would miss it
            life of ours
Not me thats for sure
            to life I Bow

Loved your poem, look forward to seeing more of yours  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Nan
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8 posted 2000-04-06 07:55 AM


...and a precious one it is - Nice job here..
Welcome to Passions...

Aimster
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9 posted 2000-04-06 09:41 AM


I really liked this! Welcome to Passions   This is a great place! Life is all these things you describe here...really liked the feelings and the sentiments. Look forward to more of your work.

Take care & have a nice day.

Amy   S M I L E!

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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