Open Poetry #6 |
Life |
CupidyCassie New Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 5NJ |
Life Is it really what it's cracked up to be? Moments of hope and loss Friends that come and go Feelings of despair Cheerished loved ones Fitting in Being afraid Knowing someone will always be there Feeling loved Helping others Showing your true colors Being yourself Life is a gift |
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Tom Sawyer New Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 9 |
I like the progression of feelings in this. Well done. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cassie~ I like this. Welcome to Passion's. YES .. life is all that and MORE ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think marge has said it perfectly. It is certainly an amazing experience. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Life is still the best show in town. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! There is a lot of wisdom in your poem. Please check your email for a special welcome. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welcome to the family~ Life has it ups and downs Lots and laughter and frowns But who would miss it life of ours Not me thats for sure to life I Bow Loved your poem, look forward to seeing more of yours Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and a precious one it is - Nice job here.. Welcome to Passions... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I really liked this! Welcome to Passions This is a great place! Life is all these things you describe here...really liked the feelings and the sentiments. Look forward to more of your work. Take care & have a nice day. Amy S M I L E! ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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