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Upon Wings Of Hawk
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Upon Wings Of Hawk |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Upon Wings Of Hawk Doth thine eyes shadow with darkness whilst I call thy name above starkness cradle thy ailing body within thine arms cast away wicked spells of evil charms. I leave thy destiny prisoned within thee till ye light of day shineth on forever free I've seen thee smile to thy lasses young and of flowers fragrance a song ye sung. Ye hail to behold thy cherished women abstinence of touch yields thee swim'in against thine tides of harmony in danger catch not ye undertow for thou stranger. I grant thee to follow thy blood as it flows whilst whispering wind speaks as it blows leaves of nature kiss thee ground ye walk make thee wishes fly upon wings of hawk. Upon thy arrival of thine mornings rebirth come to me bearing gifts of simple earth then I shall see thy honesty ye possess and forgive thee all thine errs nonetheless. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Esmeralda~ Refreshing thoughts. 'Upon thy arrival of thine mornings rebirth come to me bearing gifts of simple earth then I shall see thy honesty ye possess and forgive thee all thine errs nonetheless.' Welcome to our 'family' of Passion's poets. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Lady Marge, I thank thee with gracious heart for thou kind words of welcome and praise. Bless your dear heart with kindness. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful, I must say I usually have trouble reading poetry with thee's and thou's, but the flow of this is great and the emotions beautiful, really nicely written  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A love poem tenderly written. The ending was just beautiful Liz |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Corazon, I thank you, and I do understand where your coming from in your statement about the thee's and thou's, I also could not fathom them, but I've just started reading a book staged in this era and it has inspired me. Lady Santos, I thank you most kindly. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is poetry. Obviously, written by a talented poet. Welcome to these halls of poetic expression. Yours is a welcomed addition, and one to enjoy. Looking forward to more. DH ps....thank you for your kind response to my poem. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Esmerelda, very well done! It carries me to a Scottish castle upon the moor - which is where I would live if my heart had its way. Welcome to Passions, and thank you for the lovely trip you sent me on!  Troy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This flows beautifully..James |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Sir Danny, I thank thee most kindly for thy high regards of thine abilities. Sir Troy, My thanks I offer to thee for taking thy trip and enjoying, 'twas all my pleasure. Sir James, I curtsy to thee in thanks. [This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Lady Denise: I bid to ye thanks and fair smiles for thine eyes have seen you've walked miles through thy Passions Poetry. Always a kind response from thou mind of yours makes me know you are a special person. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This work is rich in flavor and style. Extremely enjoyable reading...thank you |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Sir Balladeer, I curtsy to thee in thanks. |
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