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Drummer6969
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since 2000-04-04
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0 posted 2000-04-04 11:59 PM


The time draws near
The paths arn't clear
As you decide on the way
That our lives will lay
If you leave I will cry
Thinking that I want to die
If you stay, we'll be together
I know it will be forever
As I see your heart decide,
I will think of us together
For now and forever!!!



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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-04-05 12:11 PM


Drummer

hello and welcome to passions. this was a great piece you wrote here. i hope that you and this person stay together as well. i look forward to reading some more of your work. take care,

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 2000-04-05 10:29 AM


Welcome to passions  
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-04-05 10:33 AM


Check your email for a special welcome!
Welcome to Passions!

I liked this, and those decision times can be hard. Hope things work out for ya both.

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