»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #6
»
Do you remember?
| Open Poetry #6 |
|
Do you remember? |
|
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
|
Do you remember? Have you already forgotten The magic between us? The feel of my hand in yours, The way your eyes spoke to me In a single glance I’ve memorized your touch Your taste All stored in the album of my mind Pages that will never fade Can you recall the heat Fire Passion That kept us burning the midnight oil? When you’d wake me in the still of night Just to make love to me once again? Reminisce upon our memories When the sunsets were always golden And the rain never fell Let your mind wander through the past Back to the time When you held me in your arms And touched my face Do you remember? Because I know I’ll never forget |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved | |||
Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so sad, Tara. Sometimes people forget because they choose to. You have expressed your pain very well here. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching, Tara. Very beautiful! Denise |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's nice to see you posting, Tara.. This is wonderfully sentimental..  |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tara, the images you capture in this one are wonderful. I second Nan, it's nice to see you posting again  |
||
|
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice title and even nicer poetry. Enjoy your writing. |
||
|
Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is so touching, memories are priceless, but sometimes painful...very nicely written |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"Your touch and your taste all stored in the album of my mind", How beautiful. Very tender love poem Liz |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like your poem very much, Tara... *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 04-06-2000).] |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ This just happens to be a lovely romantic poem .. full to overflowing with longing and sentimental thought. 'Let your mind wander through the past Back to the time When you held me in your arms And touched my face Do you remember? Because I know I’ll never forget' Those memories do hang in there ! Beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Suthern, I loved your poem. I once longed for a married man and know the feelings that you speak of. Nan and Ruth, it's nice to be back! I was gone way too long. Elizabeth and Corazon, no pain here, just a gentle reminder at what we once shared (and hopefully will again). Denise, Danny, Liz and Marge, thank you for commenting. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
||
|
hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Tara, this is beautiful! One thing is for certain - this poem will not be forgotten. Thanks so much for sharing!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
hsystem, thanks for the enthusiastic reply! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
||
|
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Tara, how could anybody forget, this is beautiful, like the poet. Parker |
||
|
christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
What a lovely and touching work of art. Really paints the picture of the emotions. Great poem! Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tara~ This was filled with a passionate feeling of desire. What a fantastic read, I enjoyed it very much. Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Parker,  Thank you.Christie and Tracie, thank you very much! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such beautiful memories written with grace and tenderness. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
