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Thy Fair Luna
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Thy Fair Luna |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Luna, thy beauty is fair Indeed fairer by far Than for just what you are Surely not how bright or rare Nor your constant repair More so than any mortal device Is the reason I hold you dear For your beauty indisputably clear Those virtues can be counted thrice No, something else must suffice It is not outward appearance descried Which strengthens your beauty To confess this, I feel is my duty To me your fairness is found inside Fair, for how you make me feel tonight |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is not outward appearance descried Which strengthens your beauty To confess this, I feel is my duty To me your fairness is found inside Fair, for how you make me feel tonight -------------------- *sigh* feels pretty great dont it... stalking you in content, your jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
such lovely images are drawn in this. your so very gifted. peace gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
told ya I was in JML poem withdrawl...(smile) a girls gotta do...well, you know  stalking you still... your jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, JML! You've painted a lovely vision!! Denise |
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