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Demeanor Of A Fawn
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Demeanor Of A Fawn |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Demeanor Of A Fawn As the sun rises in the east, a fawn passes my way every morning, on her daily tour of the land she resides in. I sit calmly and watch her as she watches me, she is so calm and serene, and I find that I am too when she is there. I find myself wanting to reach out and touch her, as if she posses all of the beauty and serenity at that very moment in life. As human as I am, I find myself looking outwardly for peace and understanding that for some reason I do not posses on my own. To walk free of the chains of life eludes me. My life is surrounded by such beauty of nature, family, and friends why can I not feel it. Seemingly missing the nature of life’s treasures, which are as free as the fawn, I keep yearning for peace and clear insight of my life and its meanings. I will continue to keep my eyes and heart open so as to find that in which I lack being the tranquillity and serenest of the fawn, for I know it is obtainable if I truly desire it. Tomorrow she shall pass my way and give my heart the joy of seeing her beauty and I will thank mother nature for her gift’s she so freely gives me. By, Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love the title to this one..it's such a serene poem  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lady Hoot, She gives me joy every time I see her, even when my life seems to be falling apart, I know that is why God gave us the beauty in mother nature so we could endure life's trials just by opening our eyes and looking around. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow cerenity..this is exceptional...you write this with such beauty and grace. I love poems about nature and this one is perfect. there are so many beautiful things around us everyday, that we take for granted. this is so very well expressed. take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very soothing piece. I liked this... Tomorrow she shall pass my way and give my heart the joy of seeing her beauty and I will thank mother nature for her gift’s she so freely gives me. JML |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful and peaceful, Cerenity! Denise |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
This is wonderful cerenity...simply wonderful. Some people never fully appreciate the beauty that nature holds. This piece does just that very well. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I like the demeanor of the poem. It is tranquilizing and well written Liz |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Janet, JML, Denise, Chris, Liz, I live in the middle of town on a mountain that most people just drive around and don't know is there. On the top of this mountain is a ranch that has every kind of animal there is and of course my fawn, so I get to see her everyday as she passes by my property. I love her and I think we both enjoy each others company. Thank you so much for your beautiful replys. Cerenity |
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