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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
fresh as salt kissed air painted by waves bearing peace echoes of whispers © RAM 4/3/00 |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Very short and sweet, but expressing a lot. Sometimes it doesn't take many words to display how you feel. WEll done. Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart. *Cassie Roseen* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ram~ I like this. I am into Haiku. Keep 'em coming. You've done a BEAUTIFUL job with this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a welcome breeze this is! Fresh and sweet...MMmmnice! |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Dawn, thanks. Sometimes zero words work even better. Marge, I have used the Haiku form relatively little. Thanks. I like to joke that I am not zensitive enough to write many of them. LOL Thanks, Serenity. I'm tickled to think that the feeling of a breeze comes across - I was wanting it to feel that way. Rick [This message has been edited by RAM (edited 04-04-2000).] |
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