Open Poetry #6 |
No Rest |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This early April Morning tried to squeeze wearily through the window blinds like a tomcat who'd enjoyed too many fights the night before. ~ ~ ~ Pawing the shades, he attempted to wriggle between, bloody and torn-eared; scruffy, determined to rouse us from our fleeting slumber for a stroke, a forgiving love, and some tasty vittles. ~ ~ ~ A cat might have received, but Morning brought no excuses. He arrived unwanted, rejected, glaring mercilessly into our eyes. He was a wild, incorrigible, self-designated eccentric; and we slammed the window, pulled tight the curtains. But he sat outside howling. And there was no rest. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I only know one cat like that and it's yours, did I miss something..? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And you just lost an hour, sleepyheads Nicely written Enjoyable to read Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent I love the extended metaphore |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good! I just visited your website and signed your guestbook. You have such talent! Incredible, Rosemary! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like the cat metaphor, as I love cats and would much prefer a kitty to waking up in the morning! Good work, Rosemary. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ You are AWESOME ! Such a delightful read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Great simile, Rosemary. Enjoyed. |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
I'm tired too. I like the way you make that darn sun irritate like a caterwauling cat. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
All I can say is.. Darn you are good! As always. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
rosemary, this is excellent, love the imagery, very creative metaphor. I feel this way on sunday morns when ya wanna sleep late...add the the list of intrusions-- early morning phone calls...the worst (smile) thank you for you kind and understanding reply to my poem about depression, im sorry you know this pain...please do post your poem about your mother...we would both love to see it and most importantly learn from it. take care, jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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