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Take My Hand, Walk With Me. . .
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Take My Hand, Walk With Me. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Take my hand, love of my heart, I've got the map, I know where to start We start with two people, you and me Where will we end up? We'll just have to wait and see Walk with me, song of my soul You make me complete, you make my life whole Moving with me in harmony, life's gentle song How long will this last? Hopefully, throughout my whole life long Together we'll be, light of my life You rescued my spirit, taken me away from this strife Now that you're back in my life, I'll never let go How much can I thank you? More my love, than you'll ever know. ---------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh Sven, you make us swoon... this is a very sweet and romantic poem of dedication and promise... just perfect for that songbird.  take care, jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ohh-- this was sweet~ I love this one~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sven, your poetry lately has been so much like music...lyrical and sweet! This is very good! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sven, you old softie, you. This is very touching....nice work. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are such a darling man! Melting hearts all over the forum... (Just love the musical allusion, too...) Sweetie-pie! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
OK...I running out of kleenex boxes!! Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....excellent words and emotion in this one. Here is my hand...can we walk?? What do you say?? I am game if you are.... ------------------------------------------------ Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven I liked the thoughts and the style you used here. The way you ask a question and than aswered it at the end of each paragraph. James |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very romantic--I like the metaphors used in here. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Sven - nice work, Gentleman Poet! Living proof that chivalry is not dead.  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
beautiful! Corinne |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Sven! Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
WOnderful words and feelings here Sven, anyone would be a fool not to take your offered hand!!  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Our incorrigible romantic at his best!!..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Your romantic heart is very much on display in this render. Very moving. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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