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snuffy Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 19 |
When will my prince charming come and take me? When will he take me away from this place, Away from the mess, from the loneliness.. When could that prince charming realize that I am ready for him, Ready for him to take me into his arms, and steel me from this world that I live in. When will he realize that I am looking for him, in a daily search of him… Will he attend to me? Will he even look at me? Is he beautiful? Is he passionate? What is he? Where is he? When will he be he? My prince charming, I command you to come, To take my place, to live in me, within me…. Come, you are welcome here, always, all the time. I am here for you, will be, have been, waiting….. My prince charming….. My death. 1/04/2000 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I just love the ending on this! What a total surprise! Powerful, solemn stuff here. Welcome to Passions!  'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Welcome to Passions, Snuffy. A good first posting. Yes, these are questions we all have had ourselves. The fun is in finding the answers. Yes, the frustrations of waiting do enter in as well. Well Done. INclan |
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snuffy Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 19 |
WAW! Thanks a million for reading it, and for your kind comments! I hope my next burst of emotions wont be so negative!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Snuffy! Your poem is very sad yet powerful in its emotions. Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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snuffy Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 19 |
Denise, THANKS! Im glad I found this website.....not only is it fun, but also a soul "smooth operator", I can really express myself here, and not feel judged.... 8-) |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
powerful first post..and welcome to Passions...My prince charming is kept locked in the basement by Mr.Wrong lol..nice writing! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snuffy~ Welcome to the family of Passion's poets. Great first entry. Hope to see more from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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