Until there was you... - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #6

Until there was you...

Rod17NYS
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 15

0 posted 2000-04-01 03:11 PM

Until there was You..

I thought I knew myself,
I thought I knew where I was,
But the only thing I really knew,
is where I've been,
And that I wish I could hide...
cuz it's a place with no hope, no peace,
where no sun would ever shine...
Until there was You..You..
You changed my life, You made me want to smile
You set me free by making me lose myself in your arms...but there're still times, where I’m dragged into that same dark past, if You knew the pain, maybe You'd understand...it's cold in here..I strive to reach your hand...
But after the storm is over, I’m only left with the pieces of a confused future, and as I put them together, I see what I still got...that's the story of my life..just hope I never lose the pieces of your heart...

CherylLynnMckee
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 215

1 posted 2000-04-01 05:35 PM

I really liked the ending...lovely sentiment!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2000-04-01 05:42 PM

Rod, I hope this person knows just how special they are to you.....I enjoyed this poem - thanks for sharing it.

Roniece

Rod17NYS
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 15

3 posted 2000-04-01 05:45 PM

Thanx and don't worry, i strong believe that person knows how feel...cause he feels the same way too...=o)

Rod

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.