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Spring News" [Poets in passions]
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Spring News" [Poets in passions] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Spring News < !signature-->[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful picture this paints. Spring is here! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I love poems about nature..you have painted such a picture...great poem! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful imagery  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
A new look at Spring through your eyes offers up visions of great surprise never - ending joy of spring - oh, this is a wondrous thing 'Lucky' that you stopped by on your way offering up your fresh view of Spring today Caught up in the reverie delightfully cast before my eyes in visions that will last evermore the sweetest surprise Spring as seen through your knowing eyes Spring springs forth ~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky this girl who reads the word crossed page that tells of things she never saw or could through sunny eyes of south but would now know how vision seeks the truth from other places and sings as sweet and true as you with your brush that touches me. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love your imagery too, my sweetheart. And I love it when you write these gentle beauties. When you do, I am there. I see it, I hear it, I feel it. Thank you for the journey. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I hate it when so many things lull and go leaving me behind security’s latched door I only came back later to think I really should’ve written more yet precautiously (oops) I turned to secure the stair door just in thyme to remember that I needed to water my window growy’s and returning I found you all... I love you, your all so surprizing, my best to you [Elizabeth][Cheryl] my teacher [Ruth] and these other two fellow colleges of mine [Marge and Martie] although we will all be graduating this cuarter (oops) fortunately for us, as Ruth will have to stay behind (you know something like the captain of the ship, thing) however we might break down in the sultry simmer (not because we think the ship is sinking) and really surprize (oops) her with a Vacasion (oops) and don’t any of ya tell er I said a word... ya hear..! RJG your as tinder as ever. |
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