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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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SATIATED I have a dream, it calls to me, Lures me through the night. A star in gleam, it falls to me, This moment, all is right. I float, I fly, in dream in dance Knowing her heart is mine. If by an eye naked to chance Though taken by its shine. Drifting away by solemn stare Through pools of green and gray. Emotions sway by the affair To her teasing bouquet. A touch, a kiss, a feeling shared, Tingled with butterflies. By sweet remiss, by passion dared, Mingled to love's surprise. As hand to hand, we twirl, we spin, We bleed the lover's touch. To understand this whirl within A need needed so much. Never a word touching the lips Thereby obscured through lust. By song unheard the passion drips, Whereby is cured all trust. In gentle arms, now lay asleep, Enfolded evermore. By softest charms, all while I weep To hold what I adore. Hope that ne'er flies by come of dawn Or morning's dewy mist. But shines glints of forever drawn To eyes I can't resist. Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*I will hold your words in dream...till tomorrow comes...* You've touched my heart deeply with this Michael...I couldn't ask for anything more, than what I've found in you... Love ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ This is indeed a lovely render from a heart that is full of anticipation. 'Hope that ne'er flies by come of dawn Or morning's dewy mist. But shines glints of forever drawn To eyes I can't resist.' Have a wonderful weekend ... there is a KARMA in the air.  Love ya' ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful like all of your other poetry. What a takent you possess. All of the poems of yous that I have read have made me feel all tingly!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Magnificent!!! You write with such style and grace as always I'm moved by your words...thank you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful words my friend |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah! We are never sated by your words, we can't get enough! I look forward to seeing your name here because I know therein lies truth, beauty and wisdom.  |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Wow, Michael...this is extraordinarily beautiful, I am quite taken by it! A stanza in particular that caught my eye, and wouldn't let go: In gentle arms, now lay asleep, Enfolded evermore. By softest charms, all while I weep To hold what I adore. What lovely musings you have floating around in that mind! Well done as always, my friend. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Breathtakingly beautiful...inspired..dripping with love...divine!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is pure contentment! lovely, lovely, love once again...And an incredibly pretty portrait of you two... More admiration from serenity...Hugs. |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Sir Michael this touches ones soul thank you for shareing Loneheart |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
An exquisite work, Michael! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Yes, this is indeed a beautiful poem, Michael. Such tenderness and appreciation for love...wonderful. ~ Claire |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Soft, gentle, and exquisite Michael. This flows wonderfully and has a great romantic feel. Exellent work, my friend. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm smiling....  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, very beautiful Michael .... So soft ... so sweet .... and so very romantic ...... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, tender and romantic!! Denise |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
devina, all I can say is ditto that, my dear. You have touched me like no other. Marge, Karma is wonderful, is it not? You have a smiley poem waiting for me? I think I'm ready for it... PdV, we know you can't get enough - that's why we let you moderate Adult..LOL Serious, thank you, I honestly think you are my biggest fan. You alone are one of my biggest inspirations... Satiate, indeed there are lovely musings floating around in here. I'm glad you found this piece special. Thank you each and all for such kind replies. Michael |
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