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Ambushed By Your Love
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Ambushed By Your Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ambushed By Your Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ Wanton wagons circling, painted ponies running wild and free, I feel the ambush of your love coming to capture the stampede in me. Lighting the night with passion, arrows flaming with the fire, sent to meet their mark burned with scorching desire. From the throat of the Warrior, war whoops of delight Taking now his Maiden fair waiting for this night Surrounded with the majesty of eagles flying overhead, it is not the ambush that I fear but not being claimed I would dread. I've surely been ambushed, taken with relished delight. Ambushed by your love once more on this night. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm too bushed to ambush you, Dear Margie, for your love Perhaps a push would "spur" me on.. Or else a little shove. The cattle were a pain today, Three wagons lost a wheel And strong desire to light your fire's The LAST thing that I feel! The cook rode off 'cause he got tired Of cooking pots of beans And where I sit, I've got a split In every pair of jeans. There's Injuns up there in the hills Deep snow along the pass My burro died along the way I'm dragging my poor ass. And now you want an ambush, gal? You're feeling kind of saucy? Last time you wore out Paladin And half his gol'darned posse! I'm gonna join that Injun tribe. That's what I'm gonna do And if you try to ambush me I swear to gawd I'll Sioux!!!!  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Now, here's a nice thought! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Marge** You are the master...I am in awe of your talent and the stories that you tell with your words....I long to fly like you  but I'm content to merely watch you soar. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge...you never dissapoint me |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Excellent as always, a very enjoyable read. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge what a way to be ambushed, I especially liked the 4th stanza LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Marge!! But of course!! Hillarious reply Balladeer!!  Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
margie girl this is so great...I wanna play cowboys and indians too..and the visuals this brought to mind... well,nevermind...   BUT do you see what you inspired in sweet balladeer...Im still laughing so hard I cant type...man I love this place...LOL |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Totally awesome, Marge! Yee haw! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Balladeer~ You are surely the King Of Quip. I'm laughing at the mere thought of your 'Sioux'-ing. Such a renegade you are. Very, very funny, my friend. Elizabeth~ Thank you, gal. ButterfliesDC~ What a nice reply. I thank you. This was inspired by my soul-mate and friend from Canada. So glad you enjoyed it. Hoot~ Thank you, my friend. Mike~ I am always pleased at your read. Tracie~ You are so easily pleased, my friend. Yeah, I like that stanza too. Devina~ Knew you'd enjoy it. Yes, isn't that Balladeer something? Keeps me laughing for sure. Denise~ Thanks, babe. Janet Marie~ So pleased you like. Yes, that Balladeer can get a giggle out of all of us, can't he? Corinne~ LOL at your 'yee-haw' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So tell us ... who won ...the maiden or the warrior Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ From the smile on my face ... I'd say the ~Maiden~ won ! From the smile on his ... the ~Warrior~ is sure he won ! <~~~~~~~~~~Both~~~~~~~~~~> Thanks for the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
WOW!!!!!!!!!! This is a lovely poem. You have such a way with words. Your talent totally awes me! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I do believe I've been ambushed myself Marge!!!! ...Have I told you lately how much I love you and that karma of yours???  Have a great weekend honey, I know I will!!! Love you, ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ESP~ Lizzie, thank you for those words of encouragement. I sure do enjoy writing and sharing it with others. Devina~ GIRLFRIEND .. you have a WONDERFUL weekend. KARMA is for the taking. I love you too, little one. Be you ... and that will be enough ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
HI Marge, ooOOOP's I lost my pony, were is he, (SMILE) can't ride in to battle without a pony, oh well I guess i'll have to walk. You make me SMILE SO MUCH thank you girl friend. Cerenity |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
WOW...your a great talent...I like the part about not being claimed..the old saying holds true...better to be looked over than overlooked..wonderful poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~  To heck with riding in .. FLY ! CherylLynn~ Thank you so much. I'll take 'looked-over' anyday ! How about 'worked-over' ? Did I say that ? LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, deaar Very impressed with your graphics More impressed with your poetry You are the queen of clever Love ya Liz |
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warrior Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 11 |
The Maiden smiles and winks an eye***** I knew he'd get me by and by.... This warrior dreams on....... Lovya marge.........pleasant thoughts... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie, my friend~ Glad you enjoyed. My 'cleverness' is inspired by the sweetest man I've ever known ... ~Warrior, My Warrior~ You have been my inspiration, my soul-mate, my friend ... the 'visions' in this piece are yours, brought to life by the tempting ideas you place in my field of view. A little touch of your love is all it takes to inspire this ~Maiden~ to ride the painted pony to the page and beyond. We meet in the glen of musing. I am more because you care. Always my greatest encourager from day one of our 'being', I love you. ~*Your Maiden*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Filled with envy over here! And I must atone for the being naughty--I completely forgot to tell you how beautifully you captured the spirit of Spirt...And now this...Marge, you are simply amazing! Love. |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Marge, you are simply amazing! was the words I read on the last reply above this one and I agree with all my friends Loneheart |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, You never cease to amaze me with your words. This is wonderful!!! Thank you very much for the kind words to mine. It is nice to know I am appreciated. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Love ya', gal ! And I thank you for all the kind things you have to say. LoneHeart~ And you, kind sir, are much too sweet. Thank you for your comments. (thanks for the inspiration on your piece) LoneWolf~ Thank you. You are appreciated more than you know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
That's why they call em snipers. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Leave it to you ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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crystalw New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 1 |
Your poem was really great. I know the exact feelings you described because of love. I've had the same ones. Crystal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crystal~ Welcome to Passion's. Thank you for making me your first read. You will find many fine and talented poets here. Enjoy your stay and hope to see a post from you soon. Thanks for liking what I wrote. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
hm... ambush - never thought of that...LOL.. Does this tactic work two ways??? Just curious.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ OH, YEAH ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
~Marge~ What can I say? I am at a loss for words ~~~again!~~~.  I love it! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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pmc Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 48Germany |
Hello Marge, your poem made me smile. Hope your not rescued to quickly. P.J |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
wonderful, Marge round em up - move em in |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Thank you, my friend. PMC~ Shucks, I don't need to be rescued ... I surrender ! RAM~ Thank you ... circle the wagons ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute |
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