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I'm A Year Away
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I'm A Year Away |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I'm A Year Away I'm a year away from dread pulling needle and thread will I walk or will I run fast way back when to my past driving down the road blind intuition saving my behind officer's giving me warnings into early hours of mornings before new laws on drinking my brain in lapse of thinking caged by simple knowledge in youth just a playful pledge given all that I know of today youth rides on cheerful play Tomorrow I will again disrupt years of my youth to corrupt for places I've been and seen seem to look extremely keen I followed them for many year each Birthday's another tear in a book of vast experiences I open up pages of incidences memories flash flickers eyes as in the days I win the prize Gold and silver never to claim locked treasure chest to blame life holds in the balance my key to never let go as long as I'm free. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem..so are you saying that you are a year away from being 21?  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Happy Birthday, Gloria! 21 was a great year, wasn't it? In fact it was so great, I've decided to stay there forever! LOL  Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, Gloria. I've got socks that are 21!!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~L.D lovely poem and a happy birthday from me Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Enjoyed muchly. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
21, what a great year, oh to be that again  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh.. Deer.... I've got KIDS that are (were) 21....  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You must've meant 29 right, Gloria??? .. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Hello everyone, it's a wonderful day and I would love you all to enjoy my happiness so here's a dose>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Somehow I have been put on a natural high or maybe it's a Passions high whatever it's soaring and so am I, this smile is stuck and I feel I could climb the highest mountain alone and the whole world would be in my vision. All right I'm done glorifying my mood, I'd like to thank all of you for your Happy wishes I guess they worked, now I never said anything about 21, I wondered if I might run back to those days of freedom, I guess the drinking part gave the idea of 21, well, back in my day it was 18 when it was legal to drink, but my experiences came at 17, was I bad or what...LOL I was just a teen living life a little risky that's all. Anyway if I could go back I think that would be the year, but there's no going back so I am gonna make 21, I mean 39 the best year I possibly can and I am so happy to be sharing it with all of you here. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely poem...I turn my age around so I am 23 now..but am out of luck in Aug. 33 is 33 no matter how I rearrange the numbers..lol...Happy birthday! |
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