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CherylLynnMckee
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0 posted 2000-03-31 03:25 PM




Souls of paper..
Hearts of words..
Ink of life..
Essence twined within..
Lost in lyric and in rhyme..
In perfect meterd time..
Interperters of thought..
Seamstress of dreams..
Binder of seams..
From their expressive hands..
Escorts to lands you've never seen..
Teach you how allusive love can be..
Spin stories you've never heard..of fary tales web..
Rhapsodies to be..
Impressions yet unseen..
Embark upon..
These journies traveled free..
Beacons of light to guide your way..
Twists and turns..
Passions burn..
Hidden meanings in the lines..
Look and you will find..
Inspirations of all kinds..
Magicians with the pen..
Sonnateers and rhapsodist mixed in..
Metaphors imbued..
Proses will ensue..
Composers of art..
Conductors of the heart..
Symphonies impart..
These poets with their versus well..
So many lovely stories they tell.

 

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Collins
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1 posted 2000-03-31 04:09 PM


yet another beautiful poem !!!! Brilliant.

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CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 2000-03-31 04:15 PM


Thanks Collins..coming from you thats quite a compliment.

 

Danny Holloway
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3 posted 2000-03-31 04:20 PM


This is really nice writing.  Got us all wrapped up and tied with a neat bow.
Nice work putting this together.  Such expressive words you pen here.
Good writing.

Martie
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4 posted 2000-03-31 05:48 PM


Very well done!  
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-03-31 05:52 PM


And you are included in this too, right? Good job!  
Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-03-31 06:07 PM


This is excellent, Cheryl, very accurate and very cleverly penned. You certainly qualify.....
CherylLynnMckee
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7 posted 2000-03-31 06:15 PM


Thanks so much everyone..I am honered that you include me as one to.

 

Corinne
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8 posted 2000-03-31 07:01 PM


Lovely, Cheryl!

Corinne

Denise
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9 posted 2000-03-31 09:48 PM


This is great, Cheryl!  

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 2000-04-01 10:11 AM


Very nice Cheryl  
CherylLynnMckee
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11 posted 2000-04-01 12:44 PM


Thanks hoot_owl_m and Corinne and dsnyder I got inspired reading everyones lovely poems over the last few days..talent runs abundant in Passions!

 

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12 posted 2000-04-01 01:06 PM


CherylLynn~
This is so thoughtfully done.
You've penned a beauty to rest
in the inkwell of Passion's poets.
Of course that inkwell includes YOU !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Aimster
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13 posted 2000-04-01 01:11 PM


-Cheryl-

this was in a word BEAUTIFUL! i see passions as a chain of friends that never ends. each of us is a link. each of us is just as important as the next. and each of us in a sense depends on the other...maybe i will write a poem about this lol. you inspired me, thanks. in short, this was just lovely hon, and im sure everyone here agrees with me..u are just as important as the rest of all of us!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

CherylLynnMckee
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14 posted 2000-04-01 01:22 PM


thank you Aimster...that was very nice of you to say...I am glad you liked it..I know I have enjoyed reading everones poetry the few days I have been in here..I have never seen such kindness before as I have in this room.

 

Butterflies_dont_cry
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15 posted 2000-04-01 04:24 PM




CLM* Kindness comes as kindness goes and you are a kind and gentle soul.  This is written with talent and a heart of gold.  Beautiful. Have a "ducky" day  


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Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 2000-04-01 08:12 PM


An excellent poem! Right from the heart of a poet. This really tells it all, and so masterfully. I'm applauding!'
Liz

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17 posted 2000-04-01 10:27 PM


Excellent writing!!!  You are a true poet indeed......from the heart!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Rex Allen McCoy
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18 posted 2000-04-01 11:16 PM


beautiful poem ... and I agree with Marge

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WhtDove
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19 posted 2000-04-01 11:20 PM


I hope you include yourself in there too?
Very nice poem!

Janet Marie
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20 posted 2000-04-02 12:29 PM


cheryl,
this is excellent and poeticly beautiful...I was smiling as I read this, as I wrote a "poet tribute" a ways back and you and I used very similar words and imagery.
I guess "small poetic minds do think alike" (smile)
great job on this,
take care jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20

tracie66
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21 posted 2000-04-02 06:07 AM


~Cheryllyn
This is just fabulous, you have written a great poem, it's fitting for everyone here at passions  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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