Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-31 11:00 AM

Why the Gods are against us
I’ll never know
But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes

To usurp the authority of nature’s law
That is the key
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes

Such a contrast between light and dark
The only dream
Of which passes for reality
In time or so it seems
I felt like such a distant dream
As the starlight in your eyes

Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-31 11:11 AM

But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes
----------------
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes
----------------
Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes
---------------

oh man...this is exquisite...I love this jer, this is so perfect and graceful.
*SIGH*...yes... heres to fate and looking in your eyes...
stalking you contentedly
your jm

she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-04-01 07:45 AM

Hi JML,

This is so good, I love some of the phases you used, I am going to have to remember them, Thank you, very very nice.

Cerenity

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-04-01 09:41 AM

Starlight in your eyes...what a lovely line

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-04-01 09:47 AM

JML~
I certainly like what you do
with your thoughts.
*Sighing* at the content from your heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2000-04-01 08:35 PM

Wonderful, JML.

I've been toying with trying a poem in French, and I was pleased to see your title.
Remarkable images you conjure up with your work here.

Joanna

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-04-01 11:42 PM

Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

*sigh*...can you say my name in french...(smile)
just stopped in for seconds...I had a sudden craving for french food .

stalking you still,
your jm

gemini shadow
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 70
the mystic

7 posted 2000-04-02 11:49 AM

cette poeme est belle et ca de'note votre
exceptionnel talente.
vous es tre's cadeau.
respectueux vous l'admirateur,
clignoter Yeux

gemini< !signature-->

I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion

[This message has been edited by gemini shadow (edited 04-02-2000).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-04-02 04:28 PM

Beautiful poem, JML!

Denise

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