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Open Poetry #6

To Me You Are......

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-03-31 12:18 PM

To me you are
handsome and brave
kind and sweet
loving and caring
thoughtful and sharing

To me you are
gentle yet strong
meek yet proud
funny yet serious
obnoxious yet quiet

To me you are
wonderful and amazing
cute and nice
sensitive and loving
romantic and passionate

To me you are
all these things
and much more
lover of mind
body and spirit

To me you are
my dream come true
spring after winter
sunshine after rain
peace after battle

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Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-03-31 12:57 PM

To me this is. . .

A wonderful poem written by a wonderful person. . . excellent job, LW. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-03-31 01:01 AM

LoneWolf~
Beautifully done.

'To me you are
my dream come true
spring after winter
sunshine after rain
peace after battle'

I especially like the
'peace after battle' line.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-03-31 01:37 AM

This is so full of love....wonderfully done.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-03-31 07:04 AM

This is a beautiful expression of love. I can just feel it flooding out from your heart. Enjoy it. Love can be wonderful.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

5 posted 2000-03-31 09:07 AM

This was done with much caring~
I loved the ending~
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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