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My Muse Has Returned
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My Muse Has Returned |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I, forced to swallow the most bitter pill, Of the never was, and the never will Shimmering veil of darkest cloth hides eyes Of my muse, once more she comes to descry She sees into the deepest depths of me Because without her, I am incomplete With a rush like wind through the fertile field And sunlight cascading in my mind unsealed My loosed thoughts pour forth haltingly at first She stands now before me, moistened lips pursed Far across the field, this ardent meadow I hear a thousand trumpets start to blow I allow myself within her shadow Letting who I was, and never will, go |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Great, JML! Well Done! I love this part: Letting who I was, and never will, go. Sometimes we have to let go to create something better and new! Thanks for sharing!  < !signature-->~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. [This message has been edited by TerryW (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I, forced to swallow the most bitter pill, Of the never was, and the never will Shimmering veil of darkest cloth hides eyes Of my muse, once more she comes to descry She sees into the deepest depths of me Because without her, I am incomplete ------------------ I allow myself within her shadow Letting who I was, and never will, go ---------------- man I LOVE this one...it comes from so deep in your thoughts...that dark mind of yours i love to walk around in  ...this is perfect.stalking you in your mind, your jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Such meaning in this..So good..I so enjoy reading your poems. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML~ I would say that you have a very faithful muse, my friend. Beautiful thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
JML, this is very well written you have a gift for writing your deepest thoughts with much clarity,as for the reader to feel like they know you. I enjoy reading your mind gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hate it when my muse leaves...we all go through it from time to time...glad she's back..(psst..chain her to the chair!) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes,yes, chain her to her chair. PLEEEZE (LOL)just stopped by to read your mind, I mean poem again. *L* stalking you way past my bedtime, your jm< !signature--> she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) You have done it again...straight to the heart. Done with the style that surrounds you. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful and inspired writing, to be sure. ~ Claire |
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