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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Revolution The rhythm of my words is now a charm; you forged it from the meaning of my needs. You drive the rhythm of my compassed heart and bridge the distances between its beats. Come rhyme the mystic whispers of my thoughts; complete in them the treasures not yet formed. Breathe life into old misty, silent shrouds. as our unjournaled days are richly born. You match the rhythm of my lucky breaths. You are the holder of my seasoned dreams. You bring the rhythms of the world, and press the richness of your own so mine is freed. And, when our whispers mute the world with "now" they'll spin it safely in tomorrow's vows. © RAM 2/11/00 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Serenely beautiful, RAM Thank you for posting this. Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very beautiful  |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
beautiful poem...excellent! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
To say that this is a rhythmic treasure would be quite an understatement. The rhythm of your words most definitely is a "charm." Very well crafted work here! ~ Claire |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
this one slid by too quickly, so back to the top with you! |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Thank you, Corinne, and you're welcome. Thank you Hoot, Cheryl, Claire. and thanks for recycling me, Corinne. renew, reuse, recycle |
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