Open Poetry #6 |
Dew on a Rose |
TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Dew on a Rose Have you ever seen a vision More beautiful in its repose Than the sparkling crystal glisten Of morning dew upon a rose? How the sweet and gentle dewdrops Caress the tender petals slowly, And the early light of morning Reflects the splendor of its glory. Through this everyday occurrence Nature tells us all it knows; Love is everywhere around us Like the dew upon a rose. Terry Woodson ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The title grabbed me, and I'm glad it did! This was beautiful! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Terry, This was so beautiful! I am glad I took the time to read. Great work you have here! Take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
terry, this is exquisite, perfect imagery... Than the sparkling crystal glisten Of morning dew upon a rose? How the sweet and gentle dewdrops Caress the tender petals slowly, And the early light of morning Reflects the splendor of its glory. --------------------- very well written. thank you for you very kind reply to my work take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ This is just gorgeous ! Absolutely so soft and casual as to make it seem vivid enough to reach out and touch. I like what you do with images. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This was magnificent~ I love your writing Terry~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Terry...beautiful poem, hope your enjoying the archives |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
very sweet in its simplicity. I loved the sentiment. David2 |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
That was so beautiful...such lovely words....wonderful picture you painted. I am at a loss for words to describe it.So beautiful! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Echoing the others...a lovely piece of writing. ~ Claire |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Such soft, feathery beauty here! The title pulled me in also, and like Elizabeth, I'm glad it did! Wonderful work! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful.....like the dew on the rose. |
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