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The Veil
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The Veil |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The Veil Your face haunts my dreams a touch, places me in a trance eyes that forever hypnotize for you my soul would bleed I love you for who you are and who I am when I’m with you you make me laugh without a care not knowing how or why Feel my heart beat I want you to understand these things you never knew were covered, with the veil Marina Mar 3 2000 |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Beautiful poem...its not often we find someone we can be ourselves with and can open up to. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Hmmm... and this side of you is nice too... Very nice Marina |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. I enjoyed your poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well written  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Cheryl,thank you and yes your right. Local Rebel, thank you....there is more to me then just....well you know. Mike and Hoot, your compliments are very much appreciated. Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love you for who you are and who I am when I’m with you you make me laugh without a care not knowing how or why ------------------- *sigh* unconditional love...it is the thing perfect poems are made of...this one is no exception. beautiful poem of honest devotion Marina. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, this is excellent. . . it's not often that we get to lift the veil and show who we really are. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nicely done..I enjoyed this... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A beautiful poem you can be proud of Marina Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jm,thank you as always. Sven, yes that can be true. Poet Devine, thank you your posts are always appricaited. Rex, thank you very much for such a wonderful compliment. |
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