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My Baby's First Footsteps Today
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My Baby's First Footsteps Today |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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My baby's first footsteps today All the windows cover with boards My baby's first footsteps today Net Nannie the net or you beware My baby's first footsteps today You'll see him at Passions posting there Gaa gaa goo goo his poems will say Hide the liquor and windex up high My baby's first footsteps today Label them well maybe he's sly My baby's first footsteps today Put away things easy to break My baby's first footsteps today My babyproof house I must make But to the Lord I will just pray [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Congratulations walt  Excellent poem too  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A milestone to remember forever!! Cute poem, Walt! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute! These are the best times! Everything he finds now will be brand new..it's a great way to see the world, through the eyes of a baby taking his first steps. Sweet poem, Walt. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I can tell the excitement you are feeling in this poem, as I feel it for you also. I saw the title and got a warm fuzzy feeling immediately. Excellent job, and a gigantic congratulations from me, and I can't wait to see his first poem posted here even if it is goo goo ga ga...LOL |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I liked this one because i've been there...LOL Made me smile. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cute way to document the milestone |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
And now the fun begins! An expert in babyproofing you will now be! When you go visit friends, you'll be moving their stuff automatically! Great little poem, and congradulations! Only 17 years more! Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all just in time for my vacation yuh |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Oh the memories this bring back..You captured the feelings perfectly with this poem..and congrats to you..they grow up so quick. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Delightful writing, Walt! A pleasure to read. That kid's got some big footsteps to follow in.....glad it's starting. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ One tiny step for baby on the way to giant leaps for poetry. He should have his feet firmly planted in Passion's in short order. Have a great vacation ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Walt, I must agree, very nice way to remember the occasion! Congrats!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL..... Too funny...Now you're in deep trouble!!! Isn't it fun, though??..  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Now the fun begins!! LOL been there, 3 times...well 4 but the last one wasn't mine. Latch those cabinets Pad the floors Cover the glass Watch those doors Baby's walking Here to there Will have stuff Strewn everywhere! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Walt, this is precious! Loved the rhythm of it. I bet you sing to him all the time, don't you? Babyproofing tip: Get down on your hands and knees and crawl through your house and yard. Anything you can reach, so can he. ~ Claire <~~~still smiling... [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Congrats Walt! This is indeed a precious piece. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is adorable Walt...sounds to me that you've got the right idea..definantly cover the electrical outlets!!! They give you the innocent face one minute, then sneak behind you to reek havok!!!lol Good luck sir...sounds as if you'll need it!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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