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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
Do You... Am I giving enough Is it all it should be When water runs dry Are you still here with me? Will you love me through good Stay with me through bad Will you understand me When I'm feeling sad? I need to know Please tell me now Give me a sign Let me know somehow Do you love me Please say you do So that I can say I love you |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes the signs we are looking for are right infront of our eyes  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
That eternal question...I'm sure he will display his affection if they are true. I enjoyed reading this quite a lot. James |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
This is a very pretty piece of work. If it is a true statement of your feelings though, tell him you love him. The best love is as unconditional as you can make it. Good work. David2 |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely poem...and I hope he does. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Don't wait..say it first!  |
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