Open Poetry #6 |
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Anger |
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ken Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 49RI |
The anger I’m feeling is so intense The veins in my head are pulsating Overcome by rage, I cannot even speak Restraining myself from retaliation I try to walk away, but to no avail With fixed eyes and clenched fists I lung into him with fire and brimstone My hatred venting out inducing pain With each strike, my anger increases Once finished, I walk away No remorse for the act I’ve just committed For vengeance was mine Ken |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Ken...boy, what a powerful poem! Excellent expression in your words. Great job! Troy ![]() Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***ken, Wow! ![]() This poem certainly knocks a hard punch! Absolutely fantastic use of language here. That's gonna have me reeling for days! Well done. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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