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jeremyc
Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 18


0 posted 2000-03-29 04:31 PM


tell me you love me
whenever i cry
tell me you love me
and look into my eyes
tell me you love me
whene'er you need a friend
tell me you love me
and that your love will never end
tell me you love me
when ev'rything is fine
tell me you love me
so i know you're still mine
tell me you love me
when i'm holding you tight
tell me you love me
the time is always right
tell me you love me
with everything you do
tell me you love me
and i'll tell you....

© Copyright 2000 Jeremy - All Rights Reserved
CherylLynnMckee
Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215

1 posted 2000-03-29 04:40 PM


What most of us wouldn't give to have someone do that for them...What a lovely thought.

 

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-03-29 10:13 PM


Hi jeremyc,

This is wonderful, I enjoyed it, and look forward to more of your work.
Welcome to passions

Cerenity


just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
3 posted 2000-03-29 11:04 PM



Jeremy~
I love you!!
lol your turn  
Welcome to Passions.
This is a great
poem. Good
Job

~Angie




[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-29-2000).]

jeremyc
Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 18

4 posted 2000-03-30 06:41 AM


thanx everyone    hehe, thanx just_another_fe, you responded correctly..  
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-03-30 07:44 AM


I loved all the thoughts here...jeremy as Angie said its your turn now.   James
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