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Always be my baby
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Always be my baby |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
Always Be My Baby I must admit it hurts to see you so into her you two seem so happy being what we were I should have been more open and told you how I felt when you gave me that little smile and made my heart melt I must admit I miss all the small things you would do the things that made me fall so deep so deep in love with you the way you always made me laugh when I was having a bad day or played with my fingers in the cutest little way I must admit I think about the way things used to be and how things have changed so much between you and me im sure well be together again our feelings come and go but you'll always be my baby that I want you to always know |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Heartfelt poem! And welcome to Passions, Suzanne! I enjoyed this and will be looking for more of your work. Best of luck to you in this relationship. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Heartfelt poem! And welcome to Passions, Suzanne! I enjoyed this and will be looking for more of your work. Best of luck to you in this relationship. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
it's funny what we remember about a person when their gone...tough subject..nicely done. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Thought this poem was well written. Good rhyme pattern expression. Welcome to Passions. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. This is such a sad poem....I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suzanne~ < !signature--> Welcome to our family of friends and poets. Enjoyed your poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions!!! This was a heart opening and soul searching piece. You write with alot of deep feelings. Look forward to reading more! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Annother welcome.... It's sad, and painfull to realise what we've lost. |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
Thank you all for the replys. Its nice to know you all enjoy my poems and I hope to have some more up soon. I enjoy reading all of your poems too, thanx again ~*~Suzanne~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Words from ones heart can never be bad...welcome to passions  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Suzanne, Welcome to passions This poem came from the heart it was wonderfully expressed. Look forward to more of your work Cerenity |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely to see a little piece of your soft heart. I loved the title and the thoughts are beautiful. James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Lovely and heartfelt poem, Suzanne! Wonderfully worded. Welcome to our little family here at passions!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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