Open Poetry #6 |
Your Heart's Blessing |
RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
A rose's petals kissed by dew Shining in the morning hue, Brings back thoughts so pleasantly Reminding me of my love for you. A shimmering glimmer in dawn's early light A fantasy of dreams in flight Carry me so freely to you In the stillness of waning night. A look, a smile, then a gentle glance My eyes to you are now entranced Gently forced by soft fingers of love To find in you my dearest romance. There are no words for how I feel How your gentleness has helped to heal A broken heart weary and torn And why I now before you kneel. So I take your gift so lovely it is That my very soul is carressed By your gentle way and heart and soul By your love I'm most richly blessed. < !signature--> Â Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. [This message has been edited by RSEvans (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Wow...lovely poem..beautifully written..its so nice to feel blessed..thanks for sharing it with us. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RS...to have alove like that you are truly blessed. Very well written. I knew there had to be more to you than what's in adult!! LOL. ------------------------------------------------ Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is so softly beautiful.....very nicely written |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such a sweet poem! Lovely... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This truly does sound like a blessing. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Robert, this is so beautiful! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very tender and passionate. Beautiful Liz |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It takes quite a woman to cause a man to write like this. My congrats.......... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh..it sounds as though you are both blessed |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Cheryl, Lone Wolf, Corazon: thanks PdV: honor indeed Elizabeth: thanks Denise: Very glad you liked it Elizabeth Santos: thanks Balladeer: praise indeed fellow poet Hoot: I don't know if she is or not...but I am. And blessed here with great friends. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
a lovely tribute. Corinne |
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