Open Poetry #6 |
A THOUSAND TEARS ( A fable of hope and love) |
Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
So who told you to walk back into my life, To enter my world now I'm free, Walking in so cool and smooth, With those baby blues looking at me. Looking as if you can read my mind, Acting like you own my soul. That smile, that laugh, that makes me melt, That touch that makes me whole. Acting as if the past were nothing, Simply a faded old dream, Pretending it was all an illusion, Your façade makes me want to scream. It was no dream, believe me honey, I remember it strong and true, Every last line, every past scene, The nightmare of living with you. The way you used the words of love, Your calculated manipulation, The way I accepted all you told, My sad and sorry capitulation, And all the broken promises, A thousand tears could never heal, And the millions of little lies, Confusing illusion with what was real. And I slept a dreamless slumber for over a thousand years, Crying a glistening river each night of a thousand heart-felt tears. So head back to that dark, dank place, The hell hole from whence you came, You once left me stumbling in my sorrow Left me crying in my shame, In truth I was at fault too, Blinded by love I would not see, What was happening to us, The monster in you killing me. So I built up my fortress safe and strong, Building walls brick by brick tall and wide, I kept everyone out, wouldn't let them in, To keep safe from the harm outside, And I'd learnt to show no emotion, No pain, just an empty shell, I lived my life alone and unloved, Self-imposed exile from my living hell. And I slept a dreamless slumber for over a thousand years, Crying a glistening river each night of a thousand heart-felt tears. Till l heard a gentle voice faintly calling, Falling like soft rain on my parched soul, And I raised my arms to the sunlight, It's healing powers making me whole. And you helped me leave my lonely tower, While the wild beast angrily roars, But its power was dispelled by you, Removed with its fangs and its claws, Thank you my friend for rescuing me, Thanks for my second chance, Thanks for helping me celebrate once again, Life's endless, joyous dance. "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Wow Tess! Remind me to never get on your bad side! I'm sure the muse of this one regrets his mistake! You have a powerful command of your pen. I normally don't write ryhming poetry for serious subjects but you've done well here. Checked out your site too... consider yourself linked! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tess, The strenth of this poem I love and I am happy for your soul. A test you did pass so very well. Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautifully written Tess ... I especially enjoyed the outcome Love happy endings Rex}>{{{{o> |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW Tess...you did well with this one. All I can say is that I'm glad you are dancing once more |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Thanks LR…..but I thought I was being my normal sweet self in this one!! (jokin!!!) Wait till I really get mad And thanks for checking my site out. I love visitors! Thanks Cerenity for your kind words I'm a sucker for happy endings too Rex….or funny ones..I liked your Custards last stand poem Thanks Hoot Owl..it became a bit of a long poem..wasn't meant to be ..oh well…at least you made it through it ! "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Tess! Denise |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
This poem brings back memories of someone in my past...breaking free of them is so hard...you've written it beautifully. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tess....excellent work!! I loved your poem and am happy that you were rescued from the darkness. Looking forward to more. ------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Tess, Wonderful! I love happy endings, too. Those are the best kind! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Tess...let me see if I got this right...you and the old guy broke up..you went thru lots of hurt and pain and sorrow...finally you heal a little bit and someone new shows up on the scene and you trust him and fall in love again...maybe a year goes by and the old one shows up like nothing ever happened and says hey baby lover boy is back...you get mad as hell cause you know it was only you that loved him and he never did and never will love you and so you send him on his way...now you and your new love share a real love....am I right..anyway this is what happened to me..except I haven't met my real love yet...or maybe I have...we'll see. You wrote this so eloquently. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks for the explanation James Now about the poem, this was truly powerful. Had to be written by someone who experienced some psycological abuse. I admire people who can walk out of this situation. I liked the end of the poem I liked the whole poem It was very moving Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tess, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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