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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
The Seagull A seagull glided silently Through skies of misty blue. The sunlight kissed his wingtips, As across the heav'ns he flew. A gentle breeze caressed his brow, And bore him on its back. He wheeled and circled gracefully, Around his lofty track. Past valleys, green, he winged his way, And o'er the mountain's height. A patch of white, against the blue, He soared in solo flight. The world around him was serene; And, yet, his restless soul Sought, ever, for a greater peace, Throughout the azure bowl. He saw the beauties of the skies, And, of the earth, below. And, still, his eyes were searching, Though, for what, he did not know. As he skimmed the wide horizon, His heart, within him, sighed. It whispered, "Life is better, still, Beyond the blue divide." It told him of a brighter realm, Beyond a distant shore; Where he, at last, would find true joy, And never want for more. A place where gentle summertime Remains throughout the year; A world of endless sunshine, And skies, forever clear. Now, faster, beat his supple wings; Above the world he climbed, Searching for the passageway Into this land, sublime. His spirit leapt within him, now, For, up ahead, he saw A sight that took his breath away, And filled his soul with awe: A lovely lady seagull, Most wondrous and fair; She flew directly to his side, And hovered, softly, there. An angel, though in seagull form, How like the sun she shone! Their wingtips touched - his joyful heart Embraced her as its own. They wheeled and turned, with earth below, And Heaven's light above. They joined, as one, in harmony, And sanctified their love. Now, unified, the duo flew Toward their lofty goal, Where golden sunbeams warm the heart, And soothe the restless soul. Together, now, they quickly found The path he'd missed, before; Then, in that blessed land, they dwelt In love, forevermore. -Troy J. Hoecherl- © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
So beautiful..if seagulls can find true love maby there's hope for us all. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome! Beautiful work here with excellent rhyme and meter. After this, I will look forward to reading more! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Cheryl and Elizabeth...thanks so much for your encouraging words! I love allegory, and I wrote this poem about myself and a girlfriend, who loved seagulls.  )Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Troy you have painted quite a lovely picture. Excellent writing. James |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
James, thank you for your kind comments! Just found this forum today, and it already feels like home... )Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions!!! This poem was lol very well written with grace and style I can't wait to read more of your work!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
hsystems, Welcome to passions!! This was a lovely piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Who knew seagulls could be so beautiful?? -------------------------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ If only love were just like that~ Wouldn't it be beautiful~ Sigh~ Great poem~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Troy~  Welcome To Passion's You entered on majestic wings of romance. Beautifully done. Look forward to more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Butterflies, Lone Wolf, Marie, Marge...thanks! Wow, I am overwhelmed by the response to my first post. Thanks to all who have replied, for making me feel at home! Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful entree to Passions. You've written a beautiful poem here. I'm looking forward to reading much more of your work. Check your email for a special greeting...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Okay Troy..I'm in love  Actually, I love watching seagulls and this poem was beautifully written. Your rhythm and rhyme are flawless...what a nice entry poem to our site. I hope to see more of your work. Welcome to passions |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely beautiful, Troy! Welcome to Passions! I look forward tor reading more from you! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions! A lovely first post, too! Corinne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really loved your poem.  Welcome to Passions ! |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Nice entrance into passions! Makes me long to be a seagull.... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful allegory.....always loved your work. |
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