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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
2 o'clock again. Time holds little value to me When I feel like this. There's a mould growing on my body. I've not been held for so long. Tactility escapes me Because I feel so f***ing guilty. I never thought it'd all blow up in my face. I guess I never thought. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Thinker New Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 8 |
************************************** Hey there.. I think that your writing is absolutly beautiful and that you come from the heart. I can see that you hurt andI want to do all that I can to help you.. Your getting on with life so much better now All you have to do is get used to the cycle of life, and how ****ty it is, We cant all be happy every day and its ok to cry occaisonally. When you fall down Im going to be there to pick you up and when You hurt Ill bandage your wounds. Im here for you when ever you need me baby And youll have made me the happiest man alive for the last six months tommorow. I wish I could do something fancy and nice but I have no money.  I love you with all my heart baby.. Your angel Ryan ************************************** To think is a right To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
isnt he lovely, that reply put a massive smile on my face . i hope u realise how much we love you and need u(ryan may do a little more). i will always be here too. that poem is one of those that concentrates a whole lot of emotion in a coulple of lines love always your best bud cabes i could make this reply look really long by doing this but i think ill stop now |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Babee,  I think I said all that needed to be said yesterday. This has been the happiest and most content 6 months of my life. You mean the world to me babe. (refer to card!) Love always, Your Gold Dust.  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I'm sitting here reading your poem..been offline for a few days..down in a deep black blue hole....and it's like..thats me thats me ....she's writing about me how does she know???? And thats it..so simple and rings so true... hugs Tess |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, poetry with a purpose! I enjoyed the read. INclan [This message has been edited by INclan (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
To the point, great & kicking ass as usual. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Cabes, Yeah, he's a sweetie isn't he?! I know you'd never leave me Cabes, just like I'd never leave you. We'll be eachother's crutches...yeah? love lou xxx p.s. that's CRUTCHES, k? Tess, Your writings have the same effect on me. Check your mail. And thanks. *Louise* ***INclan, Thankyou, you flatter me.  ***Enola, Awww, thankyou! Your support for me means SO much. I'm glad I know who you are now! Luv Lou xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Mete** The words you write are so painful, never regret what your heart tells you...although those are the ones I can relate to regretting...do as I say not as I do..lol Again you amaze me!!  |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Butterflies, Wow, thankyou so much. Another overly kind reply from you I feel. Your support is so greatfully recieved. Thank you again! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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