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Open Poetry #6

That is you

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

0 posted 2000-03-28 12:44 PM

I see your face through my hands
and traced a new skin over your skin

I hear your voice, mellowing the moment
rode your words into my heart

My own blodd I taste in your tears
to know my own pain or joy in the mirror of your soul

To find my path in the ways of your walk

To KNOW love is.
not only beleive...

That is you..

[This message has been edited by Ixtab (edited 03-28-2000).]

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-03-28 12:55 PM

wow, a very powerful portrayal of true love. This poem touches me strongly, and is written exceptionally well.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-03-28 09:40 AM

Very powerful!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-03-28 10:03 AM

I have to agree with the others

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