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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Here it is another day More chances to push me away You think it's wrong to want to be One together you and me I love you very much My body longs for your touch Why do you have to question It gives me the wrong impression Here it is another night And so goes my plight I try to move a little nearer Hoping that your heart is dearer Maybe we can set things aside To allow expression for what's inside Together we could create A state where we realte Here it is another day What more do I have to say Thoughts of you fill my head Us together and in bed Two hearts merge into one The bliss created is second to none Isn't it plain to see This is our destiny Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Wolf, superb poem.. bumps in a relationship are tough, very well thought out, and I love the rhyming scheme. "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
This is a lovely poem. I hope it works out okay for you. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Nice sentiments. Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great poem I to hope that it works out for you HUGS Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
VampDude....thank you and yes the bumps are tough, but well worth what awaits on the other side. Enola....thanks and time will tell. Marge...glad to hear it. They are my feelings as always. Tracie....thanks for the hug. We will see... --------------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The closest love is often the one we take for granted, the one that will always be there so why "try"....your words are the voice to the song my heart hums. You wrote this with the grace of an angel. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Its hard when you feel like you love someone more than they love you..beautifully written. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfection in poetry LW...such sweet devotion in this...and excellent rhyme flow...very nice work. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Butterflies...You are so right that we do take love for granted at times. It is only when that love is withdrawn that we miss it and realize what a great thing we had. Hopefully, it is not too late. Thank you so much for the angel comment. It is what he used to call me.... Cheryl...always is hard, but I guess we keep trying because maybe someday that person will return our love tenfold. Thanks. JM...thank you. The rhyme and flow just poured out one day. I am hopelessly devoted to my beloved even if the feelings are not always the same. He did think this was very nice though. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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