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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ My God, this is beautiful. If she's peeking in ... I know she will love it. Thank you for your consideration.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky, this is incredible! |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
I agree. It's wonderful. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lucky, I hardly know what to say here, but this is a superb piece, with exceptionally beautiful phrases throughout, from beginning to end. It is a joy to read. Truly exquisite. Liz |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
Beautiful.I know she will like this alot. thank you. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Wow, I forgot to breath while reading that. It never stops, just goes on forever. I have never read anything like that, Great poem. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, your warm tender poems - your loving poems - ah - darling one, I love all your work, but especially these. This one is bursting with feeling, and so keenly felt in the depths of my heart. Thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely! *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very lovely...it's nice to see you posting again and better than ever |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Truely lovely..wonderful to read! |
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