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notapoetjustadad New Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 1 |
JESSICA JESSICA,YOU WERE BORN TO US, THE PERFECT LITTLE GIRL. HAIR SO BLONDE AND PLENTIFUL, OF WAVES AND LITTLE CURLS. A FACE SO FULL OF BEAUTY, FOR ALL THE WORLD TO SEE. AND THEN YOUR DISABILITY. MADE YOU DEPENDANT ON MUM AND ME. WHAT GOD MISSED WITH YOUR MUSCLES, HE MADE UP WITH YOUR HEART. AND AN INCREDIBLE STRENGTH OF CHARACTER, THAT SET YOU WORLDS APART. YOUR LAUGHTER AND YOUR SMILE, WOULD MAKE US ALL ASHINE. ESPECIALLY IN THE MORNINGS, WHEN WE WERE GRUMPY MOST OF THE TIME. EVERYONE ADORED YOU, WITH YOUR CHEEKY LITTLE GRIN. WITH WISDOM WELL BEYOND YOUR YEARS, YOU COULD ALWAYS GET THEM IN. BUT FOUR SHORT YEARS LATER, GOD HAS CALLED YOU TO HIS SIDE. ALTHOUGH WE FEEL GREAT SORROW, WE LET YOU GO WITH PRIDE. YOU GREW WITH US AND HELPED US GROW IN SO MANY WAYS. WHICH MAKES THIS TIME OF PASSING AN INCREDIBLY SADDENING DAY. YOUR BROTHERS,THEY WILL MISS YOU, AS YOU MADE UP PART OF THIER WORLD. BUT I KNOW THEY FEEL THEY ARE LUCKY TO HAVE KNOWN SUCH AN INCREDIBLE,WONDERFUL GIRL ALTHOUGH THE GRIEF UPON US WILL LAST FOREVER MORE. IT WILL EASE IN THE KNOWING THAT YOU ARE AT HEAVENS DOOR. AND THROUGH THE TEARS WE CRY AND THE FEELINGS,OF SORROW AND OF PAIN OH,JESSICA OUR SWEET BABY, WE LOOK FORWARD TO THE DAY WE WILL MEET AGAIN. WE LOVE YOU DARLING YOUR MUM AND DAD. [This message has been edited by notapoetjustadad (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oman this mighta been hard for you to write but it is a great great tribute to your lil girl yuh i likes it alot and too bad your a poet.!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family! This is lovely. Please check your email for a special welcome...  |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, tears are streaming down my cheeks. I too, have been there. I'm so terribly sorry for your great loss. I too, am a bereaved mother. After years of silent sorrow, I finally found a way to express my grief in a way that might give others some care and comfort. I began a poetry site called "Coming Through the Fire", found at: http://www.angelfire.com/zine/bereaved A site to give other bereaved parents a place to put a permanent memorial to their beloved lost one/ones, with poems and maybe pictures, to honor their darling(s). I would be very honored if you would give me the chance to put together a memorial for your darling, precious little Jessica. If you visit, and think you would like to, please e-mail me. I would be so grateful. ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful. So full of truth, grief, pride and faith. I extend my hand in welcome. And I believe you truly "are" a poet.  ~ Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Poetry comes from within your heart sir...and you've beared all with this one...God bless you!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Welcome to the club. You make a wonderful father, and an incredible poet. Your words flew into my head like butterflies, but at the same time like arrows, for I felt your pain as I read it. I am glad to see you look at the whole situation as positive. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welcome to our haven < !signature-->A special tribute which brought tears to my eyes, what a special little girl. Thanks for sharing this with us. LoL tracie  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustaDad~ What a loving tribute to Jessica. Your heart is showing all the way through this loving piece. Welcome to a caring and loving family of friends. Be sure to check out Rosemary's site ... it's just the best there is. She has the loving heart of a mother who has loved and lost time and again. Bless you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
God Bless you, your family, and most of all - little Jessica...  Welcome to Passions... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
How beautifully touching. I am grieving for your loss and hope you find comfort in those around you and those that most certainly love you. Your little girl was a gift, and from the way you spoke in your poetry you cherished that gift everyday you spent with her. Peace and love be with you. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Justadad, The way that your words moved and flowed confirm, to me at least, that you are indeed a poet. I am sure your little Jessica is looking down upon you, smiling and laughing rainbows. Beautiful.  Our hearts are with you here at Passions. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is a beautiful, yet sad, tribute to your own little angel. Welcome to passions |
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