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Please Forgive Me
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Please Forgive Me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Talk to me not at me Run with me not from me Listen to me don't hear me Feel me don't touch me Hold me don't hug me Teach me don't do it for me Lift me don't reach it for me Love me don't set me free To much to ask of you to give To hard a task so please forgive Just trying to get flowing again, and this is not by any means an attempt at great poetry...so please forgive me while I try to shake out the rough stuff. Thank you for being understanding  Whatever strength I add to myself becomes my greatest weakness, while whatever weakness I'll consciously endure will be replaced with a strength that is not my own. G. Finley |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Hi there ! Have missed your smiling face ! These are darned good thoughts you're shaking out. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, these are requests that I think we all have of others. Why is it so hard for so many to accept?? Beats me. Nice writing, butterfly. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well, I for one like the way you shake  work it out butterfly...we all hit those times when the inspiration is there but the words aren't...It will come back when you least expect it...it usually happends to me while driving and I almost wreck trying to write and drive LOL or it happends in the grocery store... I look ridiculous writing a poem in the produce section on my shopping list BUT hey... I'll take it when ever it comes... simple poem butterfly..but simply perfect (smile)take care jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know, I always gage the quality of poetry by the emotion it stirs within the reader. You have nothing to be apologizing for. This was sincere and heartfelt, and besides, we was missing ya! michael |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge~ You as always leave me with a smile, thank you for the and thank you for the WB .Sven~ We often give effortlessly, the curse of one with poetry within I think~ but don't expect others to do the same....I guess I cant speak for all....just me JM~ Thank you sister of my soul, and I'll be sure to keep a tablet handy on my way to work....when I get pulled over I'll tell 'em JM made me do it But you are right stange places for the words....usually when the gaurd is down.Michael~ Much to kind...thank you so much for your compliments. For the record I missed all of you as well....the curse of the feeling but lacking the words I shall return......lol Whatever strength I add to myself becomes my greatest weakness, while whatever weakness I'll consciously endure will be replaced with a strength that is not my own. G. Finley |
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