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Oscar Wilde
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since 2000-03-09
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San Francisco

0 posted 2000-03-26 04:04 PM


Lonely, Ignored, Misunderstood

Me?
Lonely, ignored

You
Free to ignore me

Me?
Misunderstood

You
Refusing to understand me

Life is pain
Because of this
But never will I
Let you see me cry

Lonely
Heart


Ignored
Love


Misunderstood
Life




 I'm wild about Oscar!



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-03-26 04:22 PM


Welcome, Oscar. Enjoyed your poem--the loneliness and pain was well expressed.

Elizabeth

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-The Crucible


Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-03-26 06:26 PM


Well done Oscar. Hope things work out for you.  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-03-26 08:06 PM


Oscar~
Very nicely formatted thoughts.
Welcome to the Passion's scene.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-03-27 10:35 AM


Oscar...a nicely formated work. Welcome to passions  
Nan
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5 posted 2000-03-27 10:47 AM


Oscar, you're not likely to be lonely around here - Welcome aboard..
ESP
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6 posted 2000-03-27 12:36 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is lovely, but I hope that passions helps you feel less lonely. From now on, we are your family
mete out
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england
7 posted 2000-03-28 07:10 AM


***Oscar,
You displayed the pain and heart-ache of what it is to be lonely so well here.

I'm afraid that lonliness is less of an option here at Passions however.

Keep on writing          
Keep on fighting.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.



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