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Swampman Blues (reposted. the first person who replies to it is a rotten requester) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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The spider scampered high on the limb The swampman knew his outlook was grim Remembering his umbrella, it would protect him From the poisonous bite, that soon could infect him Caught unexpected, he uttered an oath Just before an alligator swallowed them both Rubbing its belly, sighing in content The gator laughed at the twisted event college creative writing class where they threw alot a wierd words onto a list and made us choose from em yuh yuh |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
LOL, interesting poem indeed walt, but I like it  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I will now take my bow as the rotten requester, even though this poem is worthy of being seen again, Walt just does not realize the talent he exhibits, but I sink it in his head one of these days. So until then I admit this one was my asking and I am proud of it. |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
Very good Robert I trust your Prof wasn't a Nole and took offense. Anyway you have talent. BB |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
who is robert hmmmmmm yhu got another man?? i asked my wife that once who is robert??/ nononono |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
wow - give bob a break.... he's new around here...hehe.... I'm visualizing the grinning gator here....LOL |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well well, look what I found! ROFL! I love this. It's funny. Funny I found this one, I was thinking of spiders today as one came to visit. hmmmn...hope he wasn't the poisoness kind. hehe <*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very cute, I enjoyed! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Elliott Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 35Chapel Hill, NC |
hey, that's great walt! it's all about breaking out of old cliched habits and putting new images out there, and you sure as hell do that! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Moral: Don't go near the water if wayoutwalt's professor assigns a spider poem. I guess we can be as far out as you. Fun poem, Enjoyed Liz |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Walt! So while we're worrying about one thing 'getting us' something else usually does?!! Denise |
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