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The Dark Uncle
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The Dark Uncle |
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Mars Junior Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 10 |
THE DARK UNCLE It is the dark uncle that tests limits. Shrouded in the bright Mythology of freedom, Wearing a garment styled in potential, From a scandalous past To the uncertain future, The dark uncle confounds familial pundits With tangential logic gumballs Spit Gatling-fast, and Leaving dents in the conversation Big enough to float An opinion. Mars |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mars, the unique style of your work always gives pause...this one's no different. Love the spirited line ~ "tangential logic gumballs Spit Gatling-fast, and Leaving dents in the conversation Big enough to float An opinion." ...Just cool stuff. Claire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"...Dents in the conversation/Big enough to float/An opinion"... Great metaphor, my Martian friend...  |
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