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And What of Night?
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And What of Night? |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
And What of Night?And what of night's smooth shoulder when the lace falls to the floor and all the under aching can account for nothing more than need and breathless dream beneath a canopy of gold and newly dewing kisses ferment my fantasies, untold?  Claire |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
lessee how fast can i type out my feelings yuh prett pretty pretty this is! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
And what of poetry? that speaks so simply with such feeling Meadowmuse, this is so delicate, open, yet secretive. Nice writing. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Meadowmuse, Nicely done. Limited subject, not wordy, and VERY well thought out. My compliments! INclan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ What a combination of dreams memory and waking anticipation this render is. My, how elegantly you muse. ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, Meadowmuse, this is soo lovely. You indeed write with stunning elegance. *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Walt...very sweet of you to say so. Thank you for reading it. Danny..."all" those things? gosh, thank you.  INclan...I find myself quite humbled by your compliments...thank you. Marge...as always, my sincere thanks. Krista...thank you, dear. You're a sweetheart. ~ Claire |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Claire!!!!! Wonderful poem truly wonderful!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
EXCELLENT!!!!! Applauding you work here |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire As always, I am in awe of your work. Truly magnifcent Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Claire this is so lovely...all your poems read like a soft sigh or whisper to me... very nice...very. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
What a nice poem. As always, you produce such smooth flowing beauty in your words. Real poetry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, This is a gem, To me an epopee. *L* |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beauty style and grace in such a small package...less is definately more in this case!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Claire! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Robert...thank you for reading. (and for all the exclamation points ) Hoot Owl...and thank you for the applause. Certainly reciprocated each time I read your work. Liz...thank you, sincerely. Janet Marie...I'm glad to know you enjoyed it, thank you. Seymour...thank you for bejewelling me with such fine commentary. Butterflies...I do believe in the power of the uncomplicated verse at times. Thanks for reading. Denise...thank you. I'm glad to know you found something to enjoy in my work. ~ Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Claire you make the night seem so lovely and desirable...and all I have is a big lonely bed...ha..ha...James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, that is all I have, as well. Well, that, and poetry. Thank you for reading this. ~ Claire |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Claire, what wonderful imagery and economy of words. It's proof that sometimes "less is more." BEAUTIFUL!  )Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
short,beautiful..perfectly done! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Clair, this reads with aching desire for more. So needing and so wanting, for an encore. Parker |
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