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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Another I One day I walked the ancient shore, Crunching shells on an ancient floor. While waters of an ancient sea, Immersed the very soul of me. My mind was in the clouds on high, My thoughts like distant birds that fly. My body warmed the suns warm rays, It felt to me the best of days. This stroll, this dreamy fantasy, This touch of whimsies ecstasy, Gave birth a gentle plea of charm, That suit the day and sloth of calm. May the ancient sea and ancient sky, Give birth the day I die, another I. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow, Seymour, very beautiful. I liked the image of the sea. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Seymour~ To be reborn on the waves of the sea or in the starry sky ... what lovely thoughts. Loves ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you for the big WOW. Enjoyed the comment. Marge, You are a love, Thank you for the beautiful answer, *L* |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Indeed, Terrible be the day the world is deprived of one with such poetic skill  Well done Seymour. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Seymour, Wonderful work!!! I love the reference to the sea. It is true that we are all reborn the day we die. What a lovely way to put it!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sy. this is PERFECT!!!!!! i love this poems meanings and emotions... very well written and expressed with the imagery!!! very nice, take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We'll all then breathe... another "Sigh"....  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so lovely, Sy! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mistikman, Thank you for the wonderful comment. Lone Wolf, A very nice comment, thank you. Janet, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. *L* Nan, Clever and sweet. *L* Denise, Thank you for the lovely. *L* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Seymour, me thinks you have been exploring new territories! And I like what I see! Corinne |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In this piece, we shall never lose you, and you will live forever. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely thought, Sy...no wonder, I like the sea...and you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Sunshine, Martie, Just wanted to thank you all before this poem falls into the abyss. *L* you all |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, How did I ever miss this? Guess I haven't been spending as much time at the computer and this must have slipped by me. This is a beautiful poem, so imaginative with lovely thoughts. It's classic You Love ya Liz |
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