Open Poetry #6 |
The Halucinogenics of Spring |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My last serious poem.......Repost, almost..but I do adore, the colors from #4...the only thing..instead of Fall, this time from Spring.... May your sunsets be of colors, That enhance your day's end pleasure, May the day end with a happiness, That is beyond all human measure. God gives us glory all around, His miracles are shown each day, Whether the cry of a newborn child, Or the colors of a rainbow displayed. Miracles seem so common, When you see the Spring colors displayed, Life starts out so innocent, With a sunrise's colorful rays. You can go down to the ocean, See colors doubled in the horizon, It will give you a Kodak moment, And leave you breathless in your sighing. Live each day as it may be, The last you walk this earth, Treasure God's earthly treasures, Live life for all it's worth. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely lovely, Toe... we can never have too many reminders to live life to its fullest and appreciate the treasures we're given... And you, dear friend, are the finest treasure my life has known. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Toe, a wonderfull poem and the best advice. Spring is very extream up here in the great white north just like rebirth its a site to see. Thanks for posting Parker |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful poem Toe--spring is so full and opening here in Southern California...so much color and perfume---Glad you posted this |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe, you amaze me at the depth of emotions you show here. This is absolutely a keeper my friend! Most excellent, and this is going in my book as a favorite! I hope it's not the last serious one you write, you do a great job at them! Superb!!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is one of your very best! A wonderfully written poem, by a talented poet. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Toe, m'boy, it's always a pleasure when you take of that buffoon mask for a few minutes and give people a glimpse of the kind, warm human being underneath. Very nicely done, my friend. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey, Toe, this is lovely, just when I least expect it, you turn up smellin like posies! Corinne |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful Toe! *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is too good to stay back here, so back up top it goes! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I love this serious side of you Toe It shows that warm and beautiful heart of yours ... so clearly .. In my favorite file too .... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I always knew you had a soft spot toe... they say Viagra can cure that though... LOL... Seriously... nice work man.. nice thoughts!! best to ya don't see nuf of ya |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Full of beauty and wisdom, Toe! Very nice! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Life is vey short and we can't afford to let any of it slip by unnoticed ... when we go out walking with children ... take notice that they miss nothing ... not a leaf ... not a bug ... not a cloud ... nothing Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
love this toe.....good to see you posting, and with stuff like this *g* keep it up |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yo Toe! What cha know? Ya done snuck back into PIP when I wasn't lookin'. Good for you. Might I say that I agree with one and all that this is your finest. I remember is well. Good to see you back in the fray with Sir Balladeer. Hope to catch you sometime around the 'Stute as well... just keep your hands of Lady in Red . Take care... and drop a line sometime. Peace! |
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