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BrazilianGirl
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since 2000-03-26
Posts 29


0 posted 2000-03-27 02:22 AM


Hi Guys, this is a poem that just came on my mind and I have no idea where it came from. Actually, some time ago my first boyfriend died in a car accident and for some reason I think that was written for him If it is good or not I dont know but I know it came from the heart!


No Matter
where u are
I know you are touching hearts
like once you touched mine

The light of your eyes
once was the light of my life
But to your surprise
this light still shines


It is still with me
lying in my heart
as if you were here
just to hold me tight


Go ahead
grow a little
and come back

light my life
once again
and this time
just hold my hand
and take me away


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-27 07:08 AM


Brazil~
This is sentimental, no matter where it came from.  It sure sounds like it came from your heart.  The best feelings often do just that.
So sorry to hear about your friend.
~*Marge*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-03-28 07:27 AM


Very special words, written straight from the heart.
This was lovely
Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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