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Jenna Barkley
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since 2000-03-24
Posts 16


0 posted 2000-03-25 11:49 PM


I have this life I cannot live, I might as well just die,
But if I die, I'll have to know if I go up, or down, or fly.
If I don't die, I'll have to think of what just might occur,
And if I die, I just might go right down to Lucifer.
If I don't die, I wonder if I can look back on what life seems,
If I don't die, I wonder if I'll meet the man of my dreams.
If I don't die, I wonder if I'll have many baby bottles,
If I don't die, I wonder id I'll be a super model.
If I die, I wonder if I'll just be with the thunder,
There is no reason just to die, cause then I cannot wonder.

© Copyright 2000 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
Lucius Cade
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-03-26 04:03 AM


Great poem. Wonder is what keeps mankind evolving. I liked the style of rhyme too.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

David2
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407

2 posted 2000-03-26 10:05 AM


There is no reason just to die, cause then I cannot wonder.

I really loved this line.
   David2

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-03-28 08:00 AM


Very interesting..so don't die Jenna cause it looks like you have lots of wonderful events waiting for your pleasure...and I'm sure many new poems waiting for your thoughts to be revealed.   James
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